The website needs rewriting. The sales presentation is too complicated. Customers compare prices. A promising innovation struggles to find its audience. The team wants a stronger campaign.
Each concern deserves attention. But sometimes they are different expressions of the same unresolved question: what, precisely, gives the right customer a compelling reason to choose this business?
This is where I help teams through SHAPE:
expanding their vision with V.I.S.T.A., defining priority audiences with T.A.R.G.E.T.S., aligning brand and value with C.A.P.T.I.V.A.T.E., and articulating compelling messages with P.R.E.S.E.N.C.E. We structure and discuss the team’s thinking first, then use AI to challenge assumptions, explore alternatives and refine the strongest directions.
Across the companies and new ventures I look at, a recurring pattern stands out. There is expertise, ambition and often substantial product value. Yet the opportunity remains narrowly framed, the audience loosely defined, the promise interchangeable, or the brand disconnected from what the company actually delivers. Commercial teams inherit the task of making these pieces persuasive.
The temptation is to improve the visible output. Rewrite the headline. Refresh the identity. Produce more content. Those changes can help. Their impact is limited when the underlying choices remain unresolved.
A message can be beautifully written and still have too little to say.
The problem often starts before the message
Consider an established company whose portfolio has expanded through years of customer requests, acquisitions and incremental innovation. Every offer has a rationale. Together, they may tell an increasingly confusing story.
Now consider a venture with a promising technology. It can serve several industries, solve numerous problems and support many applications. Its founders see possibility everywhere. Prospective customers struggle to see where it fits into their immediate priorities.
The starting points differ. The commercial difficulty can look remarkably similar: too much to explain, too little hierarchy, and an unclear reason to act.
Uncertainty travels through the business. A loosely defined opportunity encourages a broad audience. A broad audience produces a generic promise. The brand struggles to express a distinctive position. Messaging becomes a succession of claims that competitors could also make.
The weakness becomes visible in the message, but its source may sit much earlier.
Shaping means working through those connected choices: the opportunity worth pursuing, the people worth serving, the value worth building, and the way that value becomes recognisable and credible.
Widen the opportunity before narrowing the answer
A company’s view of its opportunity can become confined by the category it operates in, the capabilities it already owns, or the competitors it watches most closely.
A product team asks which features to add. A service business asks how to package its expertise. A venture asks which applications its technology could support. These are legitimate questions, but they can keep the discussion inside familiar boundaries.
A wider question is: what important difficulty does the customer still have, including the parts our category has learned to accept?
Imagine a connected home device. The category conversation revolves around performance, features and app functionality. A broader examination might uncover frustration with installation, uncertainty about compatibility, unreliable support, or anxiety about maintenance.
That could change the opportunity from selling a more capable device to delivering a dependable result with less effort and uncertainty.
The implications go beyond the headline. They might include simpler setup, clearer compatibility guidance, a different service model or a better ownership experience. Some will prove commercially attractive; others will cost more than customers are willing to pay.
An expanded vision creates possibilities. Judgment and evidence determine which deserve investment.
A stronger proposition may come from solving more of the customer’s problem, rather than adding more to the product.
Choose an audience precisely enough to make trade-offs
“SMEs.” “Busy professionals.” “Consumers who value quality.” Such descriptions identify large populations while leaving crucial buying differences unexplained.
Two companies of similar size can face entirely different pressures. One needs to expand quickly. Another needs to reduce complexity. A third needs to protect cash. The same offer will carry different value, urgency and risk for each.
Useful audience definition gets closer to the circumstances of choice. What has happened? What must improve? Who experiences the problem, who approves the purchase, and what could prevent a decision?
For a B2B service, the user may want less work, the sponsor better performance, procurement predictable terms, and the executive team confidence that implementation will succeed. A proposition built around only one perspective can lose support elsewhere.
The practical consequence is selectivity. Choosing a priority audience means deciding whose problem will guide product decisions, proof, channels and messaging first.
A business can serve several audiences. It still needs to understand which differences require a distinct offer, and which simply require a different explanation.
Build value that survives the comparison
Many propositions describe qualities any credible competitor would claim: expertise, innovation, simplicity, flexibility, customer focus.
These qualities matter. On their own, they give the buyer little basis for preference.
A stronger proposition connects a meaningful outcome with a credible explanation of how the business delivers it. It also acknowledges the sacrifices customers make: money, time, implementation effort, disruption and the risk of being wrong.
“An integrated platform” describes an arrangement. Whether that arrangement reduces work or creates more complexity depends on how it functions in the customer’s environment.
“Premium quality” states an ambition. Reliability, repairability, support and ownership cost can make that ambition concrete.
The useful questions become more demanding:
What improves for the customer, and in which circumstances?
What makes our approach meaningfully different from the alternatives, including doing nothing?
What evidence supports the promise?
What must change in the offer for that promise to hold?
The last question matters most. Sometimes the work reveals a communication problem. Sometimes it reveals missing value.
Rewriting should never become a way to avoid redesigning.
Make the brand and the experience agree
A brand creates expectations before the customer has enough experience to judge the business directly. Trouble begins when those expectations and the actual experience diverge.
A company promises simplicity but presents an impenetrable portfolio. It claims to be premium while leaving customers uncertain about support. It positions itself around partnership, then makes every interaction feel transactional.
These inconsistencies have commercial consequences. Buyers must reconcile conflicting signals, and salespeople spend time explaining what the business means.
The work is to examine whether positioning, offer, identity and experience reinforce the same promise. A clearer brand may require changes to the portfolio, customer journey or service model as well as its visual expression.
Messaging then becomes easier to judge. Does the opening make the customer’s situation recognisable? Is the outcome clear? Is the difference understandable? Does the evidence answer the buyer’s likely doubt?
A useful test is to remove the company name from the main claim. If several competitors could use it unchanged, identify what is missing: a sharper audience, a more specific outcome, a distinctive approach, or stronger proof.
Structure the thinking, then expand it with AI
AI can contribute throughout this work: exploring adjacent opportunities, comparing propositions, questioning assumptions, generating alternative narratives and identifying inconsistencies across materials.
Its usefulness depends partly on the thinking and evidence it receives.
Before generating answers, ask the people closest to the business to articulate their views independently. Where do customers see value? Why do deals stall? What do competitors handle poorly? Which claims can the company substantiate?
Discuss the differences. Separate observations from assumptions. Then bring AI into the work with a clearer brief and explicit criteria.
Instead of asking for “ten compelling value propositions,” ask it to develop competing directions for a defined audience, explain the trade-offs, expose unsupported claims and identify what evidence would change the recommendation.
Research on AI-assisted knowledge work offers a relevant caution: in a field experiment with consultants, AI improved performance on some tasks and reduced it on others. The findings concern a particular model and task set, but support deliberate judgment about where and how to use AI.
For shaping an offer, that means treating AI-generated customer reactions as hypotheses. They can improve the questions taken into interviews or tests. They cannot establish willingness to pay, purchase intent or delivery feasibility.
Expert-driven, AI-augmented work should produce better alternatives and tougher scrutiny of them.
The value lies in the iteration: experience informs the brief, AI expands the possibilities, discussion sharpens the choices, and customer evidence tests what survives.
Leave with choices you can test
Shaping has achieved little if the team leaves with elegant language but continues making contradictory decisions.
A useful outcome is concrete: a priority audience, an explicit customer problem, a chosen value proposition, supporting proof, and clear implications for the offer and experience. It should also identify what remains uncertain.
Test those uncertainties where they matter. Can prospective buyers explain the value back in their own words? Do they recognise a reason to change? Does the proposition survive comparison with their current solution? Can the business deliver it at an acceptable margin?
This work will not resolve every growth constraint. Distribution, pricing, availability and execution still matter. But clearer choices give those activities a more coherent direction.
A practical first session is to put the website, sales deck, product offer and customer feedback side by side. Ask everyone to write down who the business serves, what it promises, and why a customer should believe it. Compare the answers before rewriting anything.
The disagreements will show where to begin.
If those choices need work, explore Shape.
Before the next campaign, launch or expansion, ask: are we giving customers a stronger reason to choose us, or simply asking the team to make the existing reason sound stronger?

